Room 12
have been learning to write persuasive arguments, the statement that they had to argue was "No one can legally work until they are 18 years old" Here are a few examples of
our arguments from last week.
Imagine this, you are a little helpless ten year
old kid working to survive so you can get some coins to feed yourself and to
save for equipment that you need. That is why I firmly agree that children
under the age of 18 should be able to legally work no matter what age they are.
Donating to charity are one of the reasons why kids
under the age of 18 should be able to work. If people are needing some new
clothes but they do not have money to buy the clothes, when people donate some
of their clothes to them they can wear it. At the moment there are people
around the world with illness that can kill them so if we want to help, then we
can give our money to charity so they can use it.
I believe children 18 years and under should work
to be able to survive if their parents are having problems. Everyone knows that
if people come from a poor family and they have parents that are struggling
with money, they can help them out by giving money just in case they need help
to look after the family. The time has come for parents not to stress because
of their budget so to help, people can hand in money for them to use so they
can stress less.
Helping your friends if they do not have much money
for themselves is another reason why I agree that you can work at any age. If
your friends need to get something but they do not have the money, then maybe
you can shout them with some money. However when your friends need to buy a
gift but they have no money, then we can also help by giving money.
That is why I strongly agree that kids under the
age of 18 years old should work because they can donate to charity, they need
to work to survive and help their friends out if they need to use their help.
So now can children 18 years old and under be able to work?
Written by Rebeka
Imagine this you are a 11 year old boy who should be having fun outside
playing with your friends instead you are in an old factory working so hard to
get some money for your family. I strongly believe that no one can work until the
age of 18. This should be a law and it will stay that way.
I believe that all children have the rest of their life to work as
they should be learning the basics at school like maths, reading, and writing.
They also should be learning social skills so get a good education that is why
school helps you get a good education and when you learn the basics.
I have to say that children under 18 need to go school so they can have
fun with their friends by enjoying their childhood. They do not need to worry
about money or bills. In my opinion parents are responsible for bills, not the children.
Believe it or not when children start to become an adult they will not
have time to hang out with their friends. They will always be too busy. In my
opinion children have to enjoy their childhood like have fun with their friends
or spend time with their family. So before they become an adult, they have to
enjoy their childhood or else they will not have time to hang out with their friends.
In my opinion I agree that all children should enjoy their childhood, before
they grow up into an adult.
It seems to me that everyone should agree that no one can legally work
until the age of 18. However all children should get their college education
first by learning the basics. Surely all children should be enjoying their
childhood by playing with their friends. The fact is that before they grow up
into an adult make sure you have a lot of fun with your friends and family. Do
you want your child to get tired of working in an old factory and getting cut
hands?
Written by Tamara
“Smash” as a helpless ten year old is trying to help his family survive. Working in factory instead of playing with his friends outside but he has to work. I strongly agree with this statement that no one legally work until they are 18 year old because it is not fair for the kids to work for the families to survive.
It is really important that kids should
complete their college education before they start to work. The reason why is
because they need to know there basics like reading writing and their money
skills. Children should know all their skills so they know what they are doing
before they start.
I believe that children should rest
before they start work because they have more years to work. Others must agree
that children have more years in the future to work so they need to play
outside with their friends. In my opinion children should not need to work they
should be at home in the weekends instead of working in a factory.
Children should enjoy their childhood
so they can have fun outside. I believe that children should enjoy the rest of
their life before they turn into adults. They are growing their brain so than
need to rest it before they start work.
I really feel that this argument is
strong enough to stop children from working. No one should legally work until
they are 18 years old because they are not a role model. As a matter of a fact
kids should not be working because they are too young. I have to say that children
should not work unless they are 18 years or over. What do you think about kids
working?
Written by Angalenna
Do you want your kids to earn their own money to buy the things that
they want? In my opinion I strongly disagree that people do not have to be 18
years old to be working. Children can work at any age because they could help
their parents out with the bills if they do not have enough money to pay it
off.
The fact is that some families need money to survive and they also need
to work for their education and food. Although the parents in families are
supposed to work for their kids and for money I think that kids should work for
their own money because it would not be fair for the parents if they only spend
money on their kids.
Believe it or not there are some kids and adults around the world that
sit near shops and ask people for money because they cannot afford a house
to live in. The fact is that some kids choose not to go to school because they
want to earn money instead. Everybody knows that helping out friends is a good
thing especially if they have no money or food.
Without a doubt it is clear to me that kids can work at any age because
it is their responsibility to look after themselves. That is why I disagree
with the statement that no one can legally work until they are 18 years old.
Before people turn 18 they can work because it is their choice to do whatever
they want with their lives.
One way or another I believe that kids can work at any age because it is
their choice. I therefore disagree with the statement that no one can legally
work until they are 18 years old.
Written by Dymetrius
Imagine that you are a kid with sore hands. You are tired and sometimes you get burnt by a stove. Instead of going to school you are going to work. No can legally work until they are 18 years old, this should be a law in New Zealand so more kids can go to school .
I believe that kids should not have to work because they have their whole life to work in the future. Kids need to live their childhood and play. They also need to go places like Rainbows End so they can not miss out on all the cool things that they can do .
It is clear that I agree that kids need to go to school to learn reading, writing and math so they can do it when they are older . I feel that kids or teenagers need to learn their social skills as well. They need to know how to act and possibly get a scholarship .
Are kids the boss now? Do they have to work for the mums and dads? A matter of fact that is a mothers and fathers role not the kids who they make work hard for money so they can buy more food and clothes. It seems to me me that mums and dads do not work and leave their kids to work .Imagine one day a kid is working but then something happens and they get robbed . What could happen to them?
Just for the record this is what I think your childhood should be like . Playing with friends , going to school and going to fun places. Do you want your kid to get robbed because they can not fight men who come into rob their workplace? That is why I agree that no one can legally work until they are 18 years old.
By Vince
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